[OC] Astronomatopoeia 031, #photography, 2023
[OC] Astronomatopoeia 031, #photography, 2023
#photo #monochrome #blackandwhite #blackandwhitephotography #mnartists #lightandshadow
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You know what? I like this. It captures the everyday moment that I have when at around 12:00 sun shines through the gaps of my windows covered in shades and makes patterns on my empty, unevenly painted wall.
2Thanks for the comment. I also like finding those everyday moments.I enjoy discovering easily ignored details of everyday life. I've lived in this space for awhile and don't remember noticing this pattern on the wall.
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Is this just a photo of some light on drywall?
1Yes, I suppose it is. Sunlight from two different windows created the hotspot shapes and shadows where the ceiling and wall meet. Your use of the word 'just' implies criticism of the piece. What do you think of the photograph?
1Well if you're actually asking for a critique, I deleted it because I thought I sounded mean., I think this one looks pretty bland and amateurish compared to your other pieces, the light doesn't really give off enough contrast to give the picture any sort of composition, that being said, there may have been something there but due to how subtle this sort of subject matter is, it's pretty difficult to capture it just right and it just didn't come out for this one. The only advice I could think of to fix things is possibly some post processing? Give a thin outer shadow to the form you're trying to highlight to get it to pop. Once again though, looking at your other work, I just think this one fell flat, it happens, it's definitely not a critique of your skill as a whole since you're obviously talented
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