Adeptus @ Adeptus @lemmy.opensupply.space

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Hmm, I think that concept of text-based game is quite retro, so this is good place for searching people who would be interested in something like that.

Thank You very much for reading and feedback! Yes I think that many people felt like that at least once.

Thank You very much for this feedback! Yes I definitely has problems with presenting emotions credibly.

Thank You very much for reading! Were there some things You disliked?

Hi! I wrote about this problem in the game description on itch.io. "I heard that itch version sometimes doesn't work on the phones with Android. If it is the case, You can play downloadable version: https://www.mediafire.com/file/pj1ebcl1ke56cgs/Dominion_of_Darkness_1.993.html/file It works fine even when online version don't - I don't know why". Sorry for invonvenience but at this moment this is only 100% working solution I found.

As I wrote, story is OK. Not great, but it has some dark fantasy elements I like.

I had this feeling with two first books too.

Thank You very much! I hope You will like it at least a bit.

Thank You for Your interest! When You play, please let me know about Your feelings.

The first one I noticed is in the first paragraph. I’m unsure if it’s a mistake or an obscure word, but when googling the word “pacrossct” I got no related results.

Oh, it is obvious mistake, there should be just "pact". I remember correcting it, but it looks like it was not saved or something. I corrected it once again and looks like this time it sticked. Thank you very much for bringing this to my attention.

Thanks!

Hope You had some fun with it ;)

Sadly sometimes there is this problem with Android. Try disable dark theme. If it not working, than as I wrote in description of the game "You can play downloadable version: https://www.mediafire.com/file/pj1ebcl1ke56cgs/Dominion_of_Darkness_1.993.html/file It works fine even when online version don't - I don't know why". Sorry for an inconvenience.

Thanks for Your interest! I am using TWINE. If Uou like Interactive Fiction, you can check my other works: https://adeptusrpg.wordpress.com/category/english-text-based-game-interactive-fiction/

Thanks! If you play, please let me know about Your feelings.

Thank You very much! Can You write something more about "odd choice of words"? I am not native English Speaker and I am willing to improve my language.

Thank You very much! Hope You will like it at least a bit.

I am reading "Dread Wyrm", third book in the Traitor Son Cycle by Miles Cameron. Plot and world are OK, but I have feeling they are written in clumsy style.